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               THE BEACH

DO YOU KNOW WHAT RYAN DID LAST WEEKEND? HE WENT TO THE BEACH WITH HIS FAMILY.FIRST,

RYAN BUILT A HUGE SAND CASTLE.

THEN,HE COLLECTED SEASHELLS

AND ROCKS.AFTER THAT,HE WENT SWIMMING WITH HIS BROTHER.

RYAN HAD A WONDERFUL TIME AT THE BEACH.