I am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
I enjoyed reading your blog on Garry Kasparov. I love chess, in fact I used to play competitively, and he was one of the people I used to look up to.
I like the images in your work, but do not forget to attribute the images that you use in your blog posts. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source. This is very vital in later life, especially in college and university assessments.
Maybe you could layout your work in a more eye-catching way, to draw attention to the blog post. Adding colours also help. Apart from that, well done, AliJon.
Good Afternoon AliJon,
ReplyDeleteI am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
I enjoyed reading your blog on Garry Kasparov. I love chess, in fact I used to play competitively, and he was one of the people I used to look up to.
I like the images in your work, but do not forget to attribute the images that you use in your blog posts. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source. This is very vital in later life, especially in college and university assessments.
Maybe you could layout your work in a more eye-catching way, to draw attention to the blog post. Adding colours also help. Apart from that, well done, AliJon.
Kind Regards,
Samuel